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She walked that dark road in fear,
Fear of being followed,
She felt a presence,
She knew he was there

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He watched her with a lust filled eye,
He watched the graceful movement she took in each step,
He silently followed her,
Moving like nothing but a shadow

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She felt his hand upon her arm,
And she felt the need to scream,
But another hand covered her mouth,
She silently prayed to be saved

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He felt her soft porcelain skin,
Beneath his finger tips,
He smelt her fear, and the strawberry scent in her hair,
He wanted her, then and there

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She stayed silent as he brought himself closer,
She thought she could fight back,
Though he was quick to have his way,
She was dead before she knew it

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He smiled as he brought his lips to her neck,
'She shall be my new pet' he thought with an evil smirk,
He bared his fangs, and sunk them in deep,
He tasted the sweet nector of her blood

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He was not a rapist,
And she was not dead,
Now they're both immortal,
A vampires curse on their heads
:iconharliquinne:
I'm bored, so I wrote this.

I admit, it was going to be about rape, but then i figured...Nahhhh Vampires are better :D

So it turned to a vampire poem :| :D

Make of it what you will...

Almost forgot.:|...its told from both sides of the story...
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Mood: Love ~JyurriSneffets Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like how it flows, and that it shows both perspectives.
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*GirlWithHazelEyes Mar 29, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
AWESOME, I usally don't read too many litutre things, but yours was HOT! wish i was that girl!
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*Harliquinne Mar 30, 2010  Student General Artist
haha well im glad you enjoyed it XD
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:iconcheycheyrawr:
That was amazingly good :)
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:iconsasuke07419:
Awesome! Nice perspective
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~Callista13 Feb 20, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
nice...
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:icondoylezombie:
Awesome poem/story :)
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*Harliquinne Feb 22, 2009  Student General Artist
thank you :)
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:iconstore4ever:
Delicious poem..!! i luved da way both of da point of views were so balancedly written..!!
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*Harliquinne Oct 14, 2008  Student General Artist
thanks :)
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